it's just not right

No matter how many times i go over my speech each and every time i read over there is something just not right with it. I'm always making minor adjustments here and there. And now its like 814 words. :O
I'm still making adjustments. I keep staggering when i read it LOL it's going to be worst when I'm up in front of how so many people. I'll just pucker up and suck it up and put on a smile and read it thoroughly. (fingers cross ill do okay?)

With luck for all you doing adv english speeches too :)
Lien